2016年3月31日 · Here is an example of how I'd free write a cold mountain scene. Since you wanted COLD, I thought about frostbite and cold-induced asthma as I wrote this. Made of rigid …

2016年12月8日 · Each scene is a different area, but again, it's still winter time! I have been going through my chapters, and the setting description is nearly repetitive in the last couple chapters. …

2024年11月7日 · So for example, Covenant meets a man from our world who he knew thousands of years ago, but who has since been transformed into a forest guardian. I'm paraphrasing the …

2022年6月9日 · A read a useful storytelling trick this morning for increasing the momentum and tension in a story’s plot: Stop using “and then” to link events. Use...

2017年2月24日 · 2. Scene of a siege fight 3. Scene of dialogue where plan A is made 4. Skip straight to the outcome of plan A 5. Skip to the outcome of the Event in #1 (it all affects the …

2023年11月24日 · Let's see. *fires up ye ole Excel* - 2 parents - 4 grandparents - 8 great-grandparents - etc., etc... I'm too lazy to reconstruct the whole damn thing.

2025年1月26日 · Hey it's me again regarding that thing I don't know anything about. The weapon in question is fictional, but let's say it's identical to the H&K UMP...

2025年1月22日 · the woman a certain scene is about came forward) I've only read 1 Gaiman book (American Gods). I'm not ...

2024年12月30日 · An abandoned misty plantation is an awesome place for a fight scene, or in Nao's case the idea that the hero installs a serving routine into the killbots is also clever and …

2021年3月5日 · It doesn't have to be as obvious as splitting up a scene with a revelation like a commercial break in a soap opera. But it could be a tone. In my WIP my mc, a director, is all …